眾所周知,雅思寫作的四個(gè)評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中Grammatical Ranges and Accuracy、Lexical Resources充分體現(xiàn)了雅思寫作的基礎(chǔ)點(diǎn)也是加分點(diǎn)為詞匯和語法的多樣性。下面就來說說怎樣實(shí)現(xiàn)雅思寫作多元化,大家千萬別錯(cuò)過。
一、怎樣實(shí)現(xiàn)雅思寫作多元化
1、詞性的多樣性
有調(diào)查指出,中國學(xué)生在作文中最常出現(xiàn)的詞性為動(dòng)詞,因?yàn)槲覀兡X中時(shí)刻緊記著以前語文老師要求的只有用動(dòng)詞才能寫出生動(dòng)的文章,才能體現(xiàn)我們的博覽群書。然而英語中卻不盡然。通過對大多高分范文的分析,不難發(fā)現(xiàn),除了動(dòng)詞詞組的運(yùn)用,各種的名詞的使用更得考官的青睞,更能體現(xiàn)外國人的文風(fēng)。拿小作文的發(fā)展趨勢做例子,大家都知道增加、降低等動(dòng)詞的表達(dá),如increasesteadily, decrease sharply等,但轉(zhuǎn)換一種方式用名詞的形式表達(dá),就更顯得多樣了,如experience a steadyincrease, undergo a sharpdecrease。而如“surface”一詞,學(xué)生經(jīng)常只會(huì)用它的名詞用法“......的表面”,卻從來不用它的動(dòng)詞形式。如果你留心原版雜志和閱讀材料,它的動(dòng)詞用法無處不在。
2、同義詞多樣性
在寫作中,如果一個(gè)相同的詞在250字的文中出現(xiàn)了不下三次,那么作為學(xué)生自己,也會(huì)覺得自己的文章沒有可看性,更別提考官,可見此學(xué)生語言功底一般,又怎么拿得到高分。而如果一篇文章,關(guān)于同個(gè)詞卻有三四中表達(dá)方法,無疑給這篇文章加分不少。其實(shí)同義詞也是展現(xiàn)一個(gè)學(xué)生英語水平的一個(gè)媒介。中國學(xué)生最常用的形容詞就是good,不管是修飾什么名詞,用上再說,殊不知這已經(jīng)給這篇文章打了個(gè)相對低的起評分,所以如何來表達(dá)不同的“好”呢?我們就可以用excellent、marvellous、gorgeous、splendid、wonderful等。再如不要一想到“越來越多”就用“moreand more”嘗試用“an increasing number”這樣不同的詞來表達(dá),勢必會(huì)給平淡的文章增添亮點(diǎn)。
3、句式結(jié)構(gòu)的多樣性
用豐富多彩的句型,也是雅思寫作能得高分的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)之一。例如有這樣一個(gè)句型:“If we dont recognizethe...”,我們是否可以替換為:"Failure to recognize...",再如 “sth. happened in1998.”,我們也可以替換為“1998 saw sthhappening.”,這樣顯得更加的地道。此處還推薦學(xué)生能用不同的從句寫出漂亮的句子,為文章加分。當(dāng)然,這并不是意味著整篇文章都是復(fù)合句或并列句,如果能很好的做到長短句結(jié)合,使文章通順連貫,也是能得到考官喜歡的。
二、好的雅思作文開頭方法
1、適當(dāng)?shù)膹?fù)述一下原題,然后再表達(dá)自己的立場和觀點(diǎn)
“So long as no laws are broken, there is nothing unethical about doingwhatever you need to do to promote existing products or to create newproducts.”
The speaker asserts that in creating and marketing products, companies actethically merely by not violating any laws. Although the speaker’sposition isnot wholly insupportable, far more compelling arguments can be made for holdingbusinesses to higher ethical standards than those required by the letter of thelaw.
2、適當(dāng)?shù)膹?fù)述一下原題,然后只出話題內(nèi)容的復(fù)雜性,再來表達(dá)自己的立場和觀點(diǎn)
Most people would agree that buildings represent a valuable record of anysociety’s past, but controversy arises when old buildings stand on ground thatmodern planners feel could be better used for modern purposes.
The issue of whether to raze an old, historic building to make way forprogress is a complex one, since it involves a conflict between our interest inpreserving our culture, tradition, and history and a legitimate need to createpractical facilities that serve current utilitarian purposes. In my view, thefinal judgment should depend on a case-by-case analysis of two key factors.
3、適當(dāng)?shù)膹?fù)述一下原題,然后指明題目中隱藏的假設(shè)條件,再表明自己的立場和觀點(diǎn)
“Clearly, government has a responsibility to support the arts. However, ifthat support is going to produce anything of value, government must place norestrictions on the art that is produced.”
The speaker here argues that government must support the arts but at thesame time impose no control over what art is produced. The implicit rationalefor government intervention in the arts is that, without it, cultural declineand erosion of our social fabric will result. However, I find no empiricalevidence to support this argument, which in any event is unconvincing in lightof more persuasive arguments that government should play no part in eithersupporting or restricting the arts.
4、適當(dāng)?shù)膹?fù)述一下原題,稍作讓步,再表達(dá)自己的立場和觀點(diǎn)
“Work greatly influences people’s personal lives—their special interests,their leisure activities, even their appearance way from the work place.”
The speaker claims that our jobs greatly influence our personal interests,recreational activities and even appearance. While I agree that the personallives of some people are largely determined by their work, in my view it wouldbe a mistake to draw this conclusion generally. In my observation, the extent towhich occupation influences personal life depends on the nature of the work, andhow central the work is to one’s sense of self.
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